User:TCMcG/Jesus Torres/Lemonnsamm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TCMcG


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Jesús Torres
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TCMcG/Jesus_Torres?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template (SANDBOX DRAFT)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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This is a really strong beginning to your biography of Jesús Torres, I think you did a good job showing his interdisciplinary skills as an artist. Pointing out the significance of his work right off the bat is helpful, and it's very easy to read and get a summary of his accomplishments. I think adding more references will definitely help as you go along to talk about more specific parts of this artist's work. But I think for the work you have now, two sources is enough, but definitely pull more for the future! The two resources are really reliable, and recent, both being from this year.