User:TFlanaganC54/Rough abyssal grenadier/Carnesm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TFlanaganC54


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TFlanaganC54/Rough abyssal grenadier
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Does not exist

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think the article is really good so far considering that you had to start from scratch and only had limited sources. Any more additional information would really make the article strong. Additionally, I think the lead is fine as it is because of the limited information you have, but if you are able to find additional sources, you should add more sections in addition to the lead and "Behavior and diet". Based on the information you have so far, if you add another section I would suggest something about its habitats/geographic locations because you have a fair amount of information regarding that.

In terms of getting an image in, that would be great and certainly would add to the article as you discuss how it is visually similar to the other dee-sea grenadier. However, adding images on wikipedia can be quite difficult so you could find a few images that you use to create a section where you describe the physical features of the organism. That would also help to bolster your article in terms of information and sections that you could base further edits.

The information present all seems strong, worded clearly, and without any bias. Similarly, your sources are all reputable and clearly sited, making it easy to see where you got the information from.