User:TGBTG2022/Autism/Spantalian76 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TGBTG2022


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TGBTG2022/Autism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Autism

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content has been updated to add new content to the Autism wiki page. The topic of ABA Therapy is currently not represented. This is a topic that is very relevant to Autism. It is written in a way that is easy for any reader who is unfamiliar with the topic to understand. The content is unbiased and neutral. There are a few grammatical errors throughout; individual's, affect, an office, diverse locations, do not work. References are listed, but not cited in work. From our wiki trainings, it was suggested that we cite a source around every 2 sentences. Since the sources aren't cited yet, I'm not sure if that guideline was followed. Based on the titles of the references, they appear to be appropriate for the topic discussed. I was not able to find the source without having to pay for them, so I cannot validate the information garnered from them! Overall, I think this will be a terrific addition to the Autism wiki page, very nice work!