User:TJScalzo/Queer heterosexuality/Afitz7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TJScalzo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TJScalzo/Queer_heterosexuality/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Queer heterosexuality

Evaluate the drafted changes
I was unable to access a sandbox draft, so I have some comments on the article you're editing and your bibliography.

The current article is really interesting and seemingly well written, though there is always room for improvement. One thing I think could be discussed is examples of queer heterosexuality, especially in more modern terms. Much of the discourse explained in the current article is not from recent years, and I would be interested to see how the prevalence of queer heterosexuality has increased/decreased in the last 10 years and/or how it may be defined differently now.

The article seems really advanced in terms of grammar, vocabulary, and tone. It does not come off as biased or unreliable and it reads like a proper paper, so I think there is little editing that needs to be done in terms of semantics.

The sources listed in your bibliography are relevant and reliable, and I trust that you'll be able to pull some really great information from them.