User:TJWinston12/Ape Action Africa/Mcking24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TJWinston12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TJWinston12/Ape_Action_Africa?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ape Action Africa

Lead
The first bullet point added provides context to the conservation effort through Ape Action Africa, and is relevant. The second bullet point added needs clarification on who the text is referring to and more information on the veterinary efforts, as well as rewriting "excellent care" to describe some of what care may be provided.

Content
The content added added is relevant and provides further context to the topic. It does however need references added to show where the information is coming from in the sources.

Tone and Balance
The content added is neutral and provides content without bias or persuasion, leaving the reader with information and facts and not viewpoints or opinions.

Sources and References
There are no sources or references in the sandbox. Sources should be added to the reference section and in-text citations added.

Organization
The main body of content under threats to primates is well organized, but the lead should included in the sandbox to give understanding to where this information will be inserted into the live article.

Images and Media
The flag of Cameroon image does have a good caption and is worth the addition, however the image of the man and ape needs more clarification in its caption and context for its importance to the article.

Overall Impressions
The information added is important and beneficial to add to the topic, though adding sources should definitely be a change made.

Potential Source
https://pdf.usaid.gov/pdf_docs/pnabk949.pdf