User:TKUW/Tyee High School/Lin2525 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(User:TKUW)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JaysenC/International_school?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * International school

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

In the "enrollment" paragraph, I think you can put some link to support how many students were enrolled.

In "small school conversion", one wikipedia link didn't existed.

The heading "Poverty Effect in Education" didn't seem to fit with the content in the sub-heading. For example, it looks like "famous alumni" is under poverty effect in education. I think this can be improved by maybe putting sub-heading "small school conversion" under the big heading "About The School" and delete the heading "poverty effect in education", and make "famous alumni" a heading. I liked how you put what Tyee High School is popular for which is diversity in culture and language!

Thank you so much for the feedback