User:TKUW/Tyee High School/Sidetrackedsoph Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TKUW


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TKUW/Tyee High School


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tyee High School

Evaluate the drafted changes
- In my opinion, the statement "Tyee high school is popular for its diversity in culture and language" seems a bit of an on-objective statement. "Popular" is a bit of a vague descriptor, so I'd suggest rewording it like "Tyee high school is diverse in culture and language among its student population."

- For the sentence about APs, I think the beginning should say "as other high schools" (plural.)

- The content you added about Tyee seemed relevant to the topic and not distracting.

- The content was all factual and neutral, but before stating the stats about enrollment rates you could add "as of (date)."

- There were no viewpoints overrepresented or underrepresented.

- The references you added support the data you included, and all the links work.

Thank you so much for the feedback