User:TLRX/Geobotanical prospecting/Frances Mamman Peer Review

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LEAD

the lead section introduces the topic with a simple and concise definition. compared to the original this edit includes a definition and an explanation of the history of the name. by adding the Techniques and Underlying principles section this helps one to understand this process in whole without having to much information to process for a reader. The original article lacks a proper definition and does not include enough example of the process of Geobotanical prospecting.

BODY

The edit gives more information on the overall process on gives certain examples. it would have been more helpful if there was an explanation of the examples and if there have been research that has been posted on the results of using geobotanical prospecting. There is a line were it says "'''Using the areas botanical life to determine the underlying geological composition has been used in a variety of ways." ,''' after this only one application of Geobotanical prospecting has been given in the draft. If there is enough research information of the how this process can be used, it should all be provided for the reader they they can draw their own conclusions on the topic.

also for the examples it would be good to give instances where the process has been used like how Gold can be found using Geobotanical prospecting and including a simple explanation of how it worked. The draft includes the references which is very important.

the advantages and disadvantages section also need a bit more explanation from the references and also adding more information of how this process has advantages and disadvantages. They should be briefly explained. In general the draft has more information from the start but toward the end it would need more explanations with simple examples.

In all the draft content improved the quality of the article and gives the readers more information on the topic.