User:TL Scarred/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Deontay Wilder

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I decided to choose the article on pro-boxer Deontay Wilder because of not only the fact that I am generally interested in this topic, but also looking through the article it seems a little dry whether it may just be adding pictures on each fight, or maybe just adding more fun facts about Deontay that come from a first person source. This article matters because he is discussed in conversations as one of the most powerful heavyweights and boxers in general, but such little is known and people are interested because of the lanky build he has, and he is not very Mike Tyson-esk, when it comes to how the body shape and power correlate.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

When clicking on the article you get three pictures (which are not even updated to currently up to date), then you scroll down and it is just words, words, and more words. It does not make the article look appetizing, it is like a food that has all the nutrients you need but does not look like something someone would want to eat. I understand that the facts are crucial to telling what should be known but to get and keep the attention on readers you need something to spice it up, and give them something to look at. I think some strengths are how descriptive it gets when describing the title fights and his career for the past 7 years, but he has been fighting professionally for 13 years. So some touch ups on the pre-championship career of Deontay would be helpful to tell the whole story on where he started and how he got to where he is one of the most dangerous boxers in the sport.