User:TOTM123/Petrol Piracy/DullestStimpy Peer Review

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TOTM123


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 * User:TOTM123/Petrol Piracy


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Good start on the lead, i think there is some potential for a longer section here once abit more info is added throughout the article though. Great job on the table on contents as well!

Content

So for the content here there is a list of notable petrol piracy acts. It would be a good addition to the article if you could provide a brief summary to accompany the hyperlinks.

Some suggested information in either the Lead or Content would maybe be why certain groups go after petroleum ships over say merchant ships. Is it because they get more ransom etc basically a clear section on how this relates or differs from normal piracy would be interesting.

I see also that there is a section on increased activity in 2020 in relation to Covid. Is there any data you can provide here which may compare 2020 to previous years?

Is there any information on preventative measures being taken by authorities to prevent Petrol Piracy? I know certain nations are very protective of oil resources so i wonder if any measures are being taken to prevent it in the future.

Other than those recommendations i would say just flesh out the content as much as you can for the final draft! Good work otherwise.

Tone and Balance

Article appears to be neutral.

Sources and references

I reviewed al your sources and the first link does not work for me http://www.research.lancs.ac.uk/portal/en/publications/crude-oil-theft-petrolpiracy-and-illegal-trade-in-fuel(33d32579-2bf4-4983-93e0-cf0c7fe73464).htmlds Other than that your references seems legitimate.

One thing i fond was this https://www.bbc.com/news/uk-england-hampshire-54687379 it is just a BBC article but it has the name of a petrol ship which was hijacked, so maybe reasearch this more and find a more reliable source? or at least additional info.

Organization

Overall it seems your organization is good, once you add more content it will flow much better.

Your Increased Activity 2020 section needs a few grammatical checks so give that a once over or ask someone for help there. Maybe edit the title as well to something that flows better like Increased activity in 2020 or maybe change it to mention covid?

Images and media

Additions of images would improve the look of the article

For new articles

I like how you are adding something new here, try to add as many more references as you can!

This article meets the notability requirement i would say as petroleum is a very valuable resource.

Overall Opinion

My main suggestion is just add as much relevant content as you can and gather a few more sources!

Great Start!!

DullestStimpy