User:TP0041/Dolabrifera dolabrifera/Mj291 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) TP0041


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TP0041/Dolabrifera_dolabrifera?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?

It does well at describing the information about the warty seacats.


 * 1) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?

They need to add more sections. Everything else is well done.


 * 1) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?

They have to fill in more information. It's a great start, though.


 * 1) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your  own article? Let them know!

I need to cite my sources to Wikipedia standards like TP0041.

'Hello MJ291. Thank you for your feedback on my draft. I have notes for additional information to add to my draft. Hopefully I can find more information to be able to add more sections.'