User:TRNT09/Data Ethnography/Naanjee44 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TRNT09


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TRNT09/Data_Ethnography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Please check for spelling mistakes "obserbation"

Your article needs a lead section that provides a brief summary of what your article is going to talk about.

There has been a public concern regarding the size data and how it is consumed, especially with the immense spread of technological devices and sensors that produce huge amounts of data about the world, which is then circulated to a variety of users that include people, businesses, and individuals. This is a proposition. Does data ethnography refer to this? It is good to start with a definition of Data Ethnography for the nature of Wikipedia article. For example, you can begin with this statement - "It is a means of understanding social worlds within the realm of data consumption, which would involve how users consume data, how they are circulated, and how data shape how people interact and live their lives." It is a good definition. It tells me what data ethnography is. You can elaborate a little more on what it is.

You have provided three examples that illustrate some of the ways. To make it more informative and understandable for the readers, you could provide a separate section explaining the methodologies of data ethnography.

To avoid propositions in your article, you could mention the pros and cons of data ethnography by diverse range of scholars.