User:TROLLSworldtour/Flowers of sulfur/Sganz3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jmoon02, Thebluecardigan, TROLLSworldtour


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TROLLSworldtour/Flowers_of_sulfur?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Flowers of sulfur

Overall:
This is a very well written article, and you added a lot to the original! The two main things you could consider are adding some images to support your written work, and I also noticed that some of the article is in italics but the rest is not, so just making sure that your formatting is consistent.

Lead:
The lead of this article is very strong, the only thing I might consider adding is an image of a flower of sulfur! Some of the images I've seen look pretty cool!

Content:
I think you could consider double checking that you have cited all of your information, for example you say "Flowers of sulfur is commercially available and can be bought through chemical supply companies as well as major e-commerce websites." Maybe add a citation for a website where you could but it? This is just one example, but I would consider adding more universally, I think with this type of article it's ok to have a lot of citations.