User:TRoselle0998/NBA YoungBoy Never Broke Again/Llniemeyer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe you are on the right track to properly editing a wikipedia article. Although, your article draft looks more like the proposal. You should try formatting the sentences of what you exactly want to say and where you would specifically add it. The proposal is where you state what you will add/take away/edit and where you will but the article draft is supposed to be you actually adding/taking away/editing the article but in the sandbox. With that being said, you have great reliable sources, which tends to be difficult when looking at artist because most websites are usually promoting. Overall, everything looks great, but I think you need to construct what exactly you're planning on adding (specifically make sentences that will be added and state where).