User:TV2424/Flower mantis/Psychstudent20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TV2424


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TV2424/Flower mantis - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Flower mantis - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
your article changes are very nice, I like how you reworked much of the article since it reads much better when comparing the two articles. in your fourth edited paragraph though I noticed that you could use a a reference. Your first sentence mentions a hypothesis but does not link to any article to back it up "It was hypothesized that these mantises are able to survive, persist, and attract sufficient prey species in their environment even though they are predominantly immobile because they are found in lower quantities in the environment compared to the amount of flowers present" (this is the specific sentence). your second sentence also seems to run on, so it may benefit from something like a period. your article could possibly benefit from adding an additional heading to possibly split up the information into more specific sections. overall, your article is very well written, with the amount of additions and rework done to the article, you add very valuable information and make the article easier to follow and read.