User:TVenvisci/Melainabacteria/Awr2727 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TVenvisci


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TVenvisci/Melainabacteria?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead - The initial sentence seems to anthropomorphize the Great Oxygenation Event. It is a neat sentiment, but may be out of place in an article. The remainder of the lead section is excellent.

Content - If you are able to expand on the bottom sections as well as the first few, you'll be in a good place for content. A few of the sections could use some citation, ecological niche, for example.