User:TWJohn

Maveric Systems
1. Removed advert tag. 2. Reorganized History Section. 3. Removed biased Language.

Darts
1. Archived old talk page.


 * The previous talk page had gotten extensively cluttered with peer reviews and proposed edits that never came into action. Archiving it cleans up the talk page and allows new editors to come in without feeling overwhelmed

2. Cleaned up equipment section.


 * I plan to move the historical components found in the equipment section into a new preceding section entitled "History". This helps organize the article into more discernible sections.

3. Cleaned up the games section


 * The Table of Contents is cluttered with numerous games. To clean it up, I plan on removing Archery darts, Audio darts, Seventeen Skunk, Darf, and Ice Breaker. These sections contain no citations or have an article of their own. Additionally, I am going to try and merge Round the Clock, 20 to 1 and Around the world into one game labeled Around the world as they all appear to be variations of around the world. Finally, I am then going to try to create main articles for Killer, Moving Target, and Shanghi as they appear to have enough content for their own pages. TWJohn (talk) 01:33, 27 February 2019 (UTC)

4. Cleaned up the Television section.


 * For a large section, it contains few citations overall (with 5 being in the same two line paragraph). Derivative articles like poker, bowling contain no television section so I am considering cutting it down significantly to math the relative format

5. Cleaned up the betting section


 * The first paragraph contains archaic wording like "An apocryphal tale". Additionally, like the television section, derivative articles contain no betting section, so I might cut it down as well.

Comic timing
1. Removed the farce section


 * As a few editors have posted above, a farce is not inherently related to comic timing. Having it within the article might confuse users

2. Cleaned up examples


 * As a few editors have posted above, pointing out a few users of comic timing undercuts the universality of comic timing. to remedy this, I plan to create a History section that examines comic timing generally. It will mention its usage by Shakespeare, Shaw, Beckett along with the examples given. This will emphasize comic timing as a tool of comedy in general rather than a tool used by specific comedians.

Comedic device
1. Included a subsection about comic timing.

H. Rider Haggard
1. General copy-editing

The Anxiety of Influence
1. General copy-editing

Ancient music
1. General copy-editing

Sandboxes

 * User:TWJohn/sandbox Draft of Darts Page
 * User:TWJohn/sandbox Draft of Comic Timing Page
 * User:TWJohn/sandbox Ygrene Energy Fund
 * User:TWJohn/sandbox_Top_Tier