User:TabSpikes/Prenatal stress/Mpiard Peer Review

General info
Mpiard
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TabSpikes/Prenatal stress
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prenatal stress

Evaluate the drafted changes
I do enjoy reading the extra information you added but I would be mindful about how you discuss telomere length. At a point, it felt like I was reading about telomere but I do like how you tied it into prenatal stress and rounded it out overall. I like the information added about the impact of development. I read more from the main article and it seems this section has a lot of information already. I do think the Prenatal stress and gender roles section could use more information and with the recent changes in society, im interested to see what has changed in regards to gender roles and prenatal stress.