User:Tabeabenlakehal/Fabrika Tbilisi/CoolCat130 Peer Review

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Tabéa – @Tabeabenlakehal
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! Here's a few comments for your peer review :)

Lead

 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Don't forget to add a lead that introduces your topic easily and maybe provides a few points on your articles main sections!

Content

 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes! I like how you've put content concerning the physical description of the place, its history and its goals/impacts. If you are able to find more info on the history of the building, I feel like it would be nice to know more about that part because it's central to the essence of the building. I understand Fabrika to have been an old Soviet factory, but I would enjoy having more context! What did the factory produce specifically? Why was it shut down? As a person who doesn't know much about Georgia, I would like to know maybe the pertinence of this factory in Georgia's Soviet era. Adding internal links to other Wikipedia articles would be an easy way to do this!
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes! Your latest source is from 2018, which is great
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Since the architecture section is pretty small, I would maybe try to combine it with the description section. If you are able to, more info about the use of Fabrika would be nice in the description section. What are the names of the most popular shops? You say the courtyard is used as a gathering space, are there any events held there? Lastly, to make your article a little easier to read, prioritize reformulating information in your own words instead of quoting from your source (in the sections "History of the building" and "Reinvention through the factory" for example).

Tone and Balance

 * Is the content added neutral? Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? Your content is generally very factual! In the last section, when you talk about the youth's critique of Fabrika, I feel like it's more biased especially in the sentence "Georgia has a deeply rooted Orthodox-Christian value system and older generations can lean in one-dimensional people with a lack of open mindedness in novelty against embedded traditions." Although this is backed up by a source, it appears less neutral. Maybe try reformulating your sentence to use less negative terms or add an opposing point of view.

Sources and References

 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes! I like how you have both sources from newspapers and more academic sources

Organization

 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? The content is concise! For me, someone who doesn't know anything about this subject, I feel like it would be easier to read if your sentences were shorter and your paragraphs constructed from broad to specific. For example, in the section "History of the building", instead of starting by saying "Fabrika wasn't always a creative hub in the city's central location and in the Marjanishvili neighbourhood", you could say first that Fabrika used to be a former Soviet factory.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? I think that, although the sections in your article are very precise, your article would benefit from broader categories that hold more content. For example, the section "Reinvention through the Factory" could be renamed to a simpler title like "Mission", "History of the building" to "History", etc. Also, as I mentioned earlier, since you have a lot of headers and subheaders but some sections are pretty short, I would maybe try combining sections that fit well together.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Your article is well-written! Here are a few quick typos that I spotted:
 * Apartment style suites, shared dormitories and private rooms totals up to 90 rooms and 400 beds to welcome tourists : This sentence doesn't have a verb, maybe "Fabrika features apartment style suites [...]"
 * The meter-long inner and open style courtyard is between three building blocks that create a gathering space.
 * The revitalization of the space also offers a boost of traction in it’s its district, [...]

Images and Media

 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? Yes! I love the image you added – it allows me to better understand the livelihood of the place :) Perhaps make it bigger! If you can find a picture of what Fabrika looked like in the past, I think that would add to your article

For New Articles Only

 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? Add an infobox if you have time, it would be a great way to get a sense of Fabrika quickly.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? Add article links to the concepts or important subjects you talk about so the reader can easily get a grasp of the subject (ex: Marjanishvili, Soviet era, Orthodox-Christian, Berlin, New York)

Overall, I loved your article! It gives me a sense of the Georgian youth, which is pretty much unknown to me!

- Adèle