User:Tacobellbeanburrito/Cholecystostomy/Justiceforryuji Peer Review

General info
Tacobellbeanburrito, Cholecystostomy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- "Cholecystostomy or (cholecystotomy) is..." 'or' should be inside parenthetical/aside.

Contraindications

- Which of these are absolute vs. relative? Could any of them be expanded upon like you did for interposition of gi contents between skinand GB?

Percutaneous cholecystostomy>approach

- the first two items on the list are not really "considerations," more aptly "options." Could alternatively be reworked to 1. Trans-hepatic vs. trans-peritoneal and 2. subcostal vs. intercostal

- "There are numerous studies...associated complications" entire sentence is probably unnecessary given rest of paragraph

- "Some studies have shown..." Could use citation of studies that show no statistically significant difference at the end of that sentence, even if same source as study showing hemorrhage with trans-hepatic

Percutaneous cholecystostomy>Technique

- "Once the patient is ready..." What does ready mean here? You go into detail about 1% lido, what type of blade, might as well explicitly mention general anesthesia, positioning on table (eg. supine), iodine scrub, etc.

Percutaneous cholecystostomy>Complications

- "Carries its share" is a little colloquial. Consider "carries some risk of complications and adverse events" etc.

- Feels odd putting complications section under Percutaneous cholecystostomy heading since it is relevant to both perc and endo variants