User:Tacovilla17/Rolando Hinojosa-Smith/StarKrish Peer Review

The article draft so far has a lot of information about his early life which is very good. The sentences in the paragraph need to be proof read because they have some grammatical issues. Add more citations so that it is easy to see where the information came from. The article so far is a good start.

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