User:Tafoy013/Iron Range/Edstr121 Peer Review

From looking at the current article from 4/18 it looks very thought out and well-articulated. One thing that I think may be a good addition is talking more about what kinds of iron ore are found in the Iron Range. Meaning, add mineral composition and formations. Otherwise, there is a lot of references and the page is laid out well.

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