User:Tagawlik/History of chemistry/0JOTARO Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tagawlik


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tagawlik/History_of_chemistry?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of chemistry
 * History of chemistry

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * "Markovnikov born in 1838, was a Russian Scientist who proceeded most of his work at Kazan University in Russia." - the information is fine, but the sentence formation can be improved.
 * Error in reference 3- can be fixed by editing the citation and just keeping the year in the date field
 * "Butlerov was his teacher in his time at Kazan more or less a mentor in where he inherited lots of knowledge from which would contribute to his rule" - Unsurety in this line, can be reframed
 * "Markovnikovs contributions to the fields of organic chemistry lead to his findings in his own rule in which he named after himself." - grammatically incorrect

Rest everything seems great.