User:Tagawlik/History of chemistry/Eillima Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tagawlik


 * Link to draft you're reviewing

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tagawlik/History_of_chemistry?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of chemistry

Evaluate the drafted changes
-When it comes to this sentence "The rule stated that hydrogen halides when added to alkenes and alkynes would ad in a way that hydrogens would bond to the side of the carbon with the most hydrogen substituents.", I think it is a little confusing there. Also in this sentence I'm assuming you meant add instead of ad.

-I think that overall, there is not much problem that I see. However, I think that there is a lot of capitalization problems. Just make sure that adding capital letter the first letter of the person's name. When it comes to your sources, I think you have some good ones and there isn't any bias that I see.