User:Taibailey/Climate change and poverty/Sangeen001 Peer Review

The work provided effectively acknowledges the strengths of the passage, particularly its comprehensive analysis of climate change impacts and critical examination of data uncertainties. It also offers constructive suggestions for improvement, such as incorporating specific examples from the text and providing actionable recommendations for addressing identified challenges. Overall, the feedback is good as it balances recognition of strengths with constructive feedback for enhancement.

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