User:TakeYourMarks/Black maternal mortality in the United States/Ariannalicupgarcia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hannahmontana321, CactusJack1555, TakeYourMarks


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TakeYourMarks/Black maternal mortality in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)User:TakeYourMarks/Black maternal mortality in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Very cohesive and clear writing style which makes the content of the article understandable.
 * The content added is relevant and engaging—it introduces concepts such as the intersection on race, socioeconomic status, and disability which are important and compelling especially in the context of the discussion regarding Black maternal mortality in the United States.
 * The added content is is well organized and flows well.
 * The case studies mentioned are relevant and contribute towards a clearer understanding of the concepts introduced and of the lived realities and experiences of Black mothers across America.
 * All links are working well!
 * Tone is neutral and it does not seem as if the content is trying to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another.