User:TakeliaJones/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Gender discrimination in the medical profession

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I am interested in the medical profession as a career. I want to be aware of all the aspects of choosing a career in the medical profession, especially fthe aspects that are not often talked about.

Evaluate the article
Lead

The introductory paragraphs gave a good summary of what was to come in the article.

Content

Th article has good content and is relatively up to date. There are certain sections that I think could have more information, and in addition there are topics that I believe could be included, such as the correlation between the bias found in the medical field based off of both gender AND race.

Tone & Balance

The article consistently maintains a neutral tone, while presenting the information.

Sources & References

The article is well supported and the cited sources seem to be up to do date, however there are a few spots in the article that mentions different studies, research, etc but they are not cited anywhere.

Organization and Writing Quality

The article's organization is well written has a nice flow that makes it clear and easy to read. There are minor grammar errors, but nothing that drastically changes the overall context of the article.

Images and Media

The article has three images with "fun facts" about women becoming the first to do things in their respective career. In my opinion there is no strong connection between the article and the images. I would include the fun facts in the article so the images are not random or I would edit the images to correlate better with the actual content of the article.

Talk Page

This article is rated a B-. The talk page is not very long, only minor details that could be changed, such as the title of the article and adding a citation. Someone also included that more information about how women are treated more like servants than men are and the different biases in black women face versus a white women could be added into the article.

Overall Impressions

Overall, the article was well written with information supported under all categories. There were a few spaces in the article, mentioned above, that could use editing, however, it is not enough to change the overall aspect of the article.