User:Talexander7/sandbox

Article Evaluation

It seems to me that all the information provided is accurate and backed up with legitimate sources. I do, however, have a few suggestions.

IT would be wise to add more insight into the tourist aspect of the lagoon. It is referenced to including 5 state parks and states later that "In 2007, visitors spent an estimated 3.2 million person-days in recreation on the lagoon" but does not elaborate on the subject. What are those state parks? (add links and citations to information on those parks) Why do people visit? It would be useful to provide background into that information.

The wildlife in the lagoon is very diverse, and a section dedicated to such information would provide a more accurate look into this unique area of Florida's ecosystem.

The opening paragraphs could use a more interesting introduction.

Included in the "fauna" section, should be information of Florida's famous mangroves, that cover the coast of the Indian River Lagoon.

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