User:TaliaSanders06/Greenhouse millipede/Allie7717 Peer Review

General info
TaliaSanders06
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TaliaSanders06/Greenhouse_millipede?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead sentence is clear and concise and easy to understand. Content is neutral and relevant to the topic. Overall length of information in each section is ideal to get the information of the species explained. The image catches my eye and the image caption explains the picture in detail. Overall good, clear, and concise. There are a few grammatical errors in the reproduction section.