User:TaliaSanders06/Greenhouse millipede/DL11561 Peer Review

General info
TaliaSanders06, AnsliT, Amelia Twibell, Rileywalker22, Anyaeweber
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:TaliaSanders06/Greenhouse millipede - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Greenhouse millipede - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead provides a concise introduction to the greenhouse millipede (Oxidus gracilis), highlighting its common names, widespread introduction, and occasional pest status in greenhouses. It sets a clear context for the species discussed in the article. The content added is relevant to the topic of the greenhouse millipede, covering its physical description, reproductive processes, habitat preferences, geographic distribution, ecological roles, and economic importance. The information appears up-to-date and aligns well with the species being discussed. The tone of the content is neutral and informative, presenting factual information without noticeable bias. The article includes several references supporting the added content, including scientific publications, extension resources, and biodiversity databases. The sources generally appear reliable and relevant to the topic. The content is generally well-written, clear, and free from major grammatical or spelling errors. The information is organized into distinct sections covering different aspects of the greenhouse millipede, which aids readability and comprehension. Strengthening the lead section and ensuring thorough source citation throughout the article would also help its overall quality. Great work so far!