User:TaliaSanders06/Greenhouse millipede/Jesse Williams1 Peer Review

The only change I would make to this article is that I would stop saying the species name and the common name so frequently. It should only be said once and that is at the beginning of the article. You can say the common name in the article after it has been introduced once. You do not need to say both each time a new section of the article begins.

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TaliaSander06
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/Georgia_Southern_University/Invertebrate_Zoology_(Spring_2024)/articles/edited?showArticle=653934298
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/Georgia_Southern_University/Invertebrate_Zoology_(Spring_2024)/articles/edited?showArticle=653934298

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