User:TaliaSanders06/Greenhouse millipede/Tay.Invert Peer Review

General info
AnsliT
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TaliaSanders06/Greenhouse millipede
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Greenhouse millipede

Evaluate the drafted changes
The ecology section being added was important for the article because there was no original section for it or any part that talked about its predators or prey. When talking about their predators you included the strategies of how the millipede becomes prey which set a good tone for the section. When talking about what it eats it might be good to give a specific example of one or two common organic matters it might consume. Other than that I like how you talked about their defence systems. On the third paragraph maybe talk about where human are most likely to come into contact with them. Also I would remove the word "gross" from your last sentence. Overall I think this was a very good addition to the article.