User:TaliaUrb/Postpartum depression/Lbatesro Peer Review

General info
TaliaUrb
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:TaliaUrb/Postpartum depression
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Postpartum depression

Evaluate the drafted changes
I see where you're wanting to go with this. I will say that a lot of what you're pointing to is not backed up by research so the odds are good that it won't make it into the article. Maybe try to find more sources that can back up your assertions about postpartum connecting to adoptive parents. If you widen your scope past just those experiencing infertility I think you'll find more. Also focusing on more than just women as adoptive parents; there is quite a bit of research on how postpartum depression effects men, gender-nonconforming, and trans folks. Happy writing and hunting for more research!