User:TaliaUrb/Postpartum depression/Tyrcles Peer Review

General info
(TaliaUrb)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:TaliaUrb/Postpartum depression
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Postpartum depression:

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article's suggested addition by TaliaUrb effectively covers the relevant topic. It is important to note, however, that adoptive parents do not have postpartum depression (PPD) in general. According to the sources given, adoptive moms can actually have PPD-like symptoms, with depression being the most prominent but not actually have PPD due to lack of a biological birth. That being said, on average, the one resource reported "greater well-being and less anxiety than postpartum women." I suggest changing the new section's title to better reflect the research findings and editing the article's text to improve accuracy.

Links to citations are functional and direct readers to reliable sources. The article presents different points of view in an equitable and neutral manner. Even so, as previously noted, there is still space for improvement in terms of faithfully representing the content of the sources.

The article addition is beneficial overall, but it could be improved by making these suggested changes to improve its accuracy and consistency with the cited research.