User:Tamarindrind/Crichtonsaurus/FffirePenguin Peer Review

I think you did a very good job describing the appearance of the Crichtonsaurus, it gave a very good mental image of what it might've looked like. I don't have much criticism as it's very well written, but maybe you could give a equivalent in the height and weight in Imperial system? I think that might help for readers who are unfamiliar with the metric system. I appreciated the similarities made to modern animals such as the backwards-facing pelvis in birds. If there is a Wikipedia page for 'Ornithschia' I would recommend linking it where it appears in the paragraph.

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