User:Tamashi2314/Feminine hygiene/Skywalker501 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the information and writing style is great. I am wondering if the bulleted information should be put into sentences. Maybe more information on them would be good! Also, I think that the environmental aspect is really interesting, but I would switch some things around. Maybe connect the sentences where you speak about the span of time that women experience their menstrual cycle to the sentence where it speaks on how much waste it creates. I think it may make the paragraph flow better! Also, when you say "impel society to recognize the stigma surrounding menstruation," you should make clearer what that stigma is.