User:Tamashi2314/Feminine hygiene/Tygodin17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tamashi2314


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tamashi2314/Feminine hygiene


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Feminine hygiene

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been updated, there is an introduction on the topic that is thorough. It is laid out neatly with a flowing structure. The lead is rather detailed, but it does not mention things outside of the article.

The information added is relevant to the topic and up to date. Interesting addition with prior to commercially produced Feminine products, I think it would fit well in the history section. The environmental Impact section is filled with useful stats. Were there any other activists other than Ghandi?

The article as a whole is neutral along with the information added.

All content is backed by a reliable secondary source that is relevant and current. There is a variety of authors which is good to get different views to support the content

The added content is well written and in a good concise manner that is broken down in an easy way to follow. I did not find any grammatical errors.

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