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Kalaupapa Notes

Between 1893-1894, the Board of Health made an effort to remove the last non-patient Native Hawaiian inhabitants in order to expand the settlement to encompass the entire Kalaupapa peninsula, including Kalawao.

Add source https://www.nps.gov/kala/learn/historyculture/a-brief-history-of-kalaupapa.htm to sentence "In the 1870s a community to support the leper colony was established here; the legislature required people with severe cases to be quarantined on this island in the hope of preventing contagious transmission of the disease"

Add source ISSN: 0276-8186 to and edit sentence "At its peak, about 1,200 men, women, and children were exiled to Kalaupapa Peninsula."

Article Evaluation

Medical Entomology

Personal pest section is a little distracting; not really relevant

Insects of importance could be organized better and not in separate sections

Grammatical errors, some irrelevant statements that are not completely unbiased

Only one "reference" with link to another wikipedia page. There are no citations in bibliography section.

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