User:TanishaT/Cooperative breeding/Decampr peer review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? TanishaT
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:TanishaT/Cooperative breeding

Lead evaluation
Lead is not being edited from original.

Content evaluation
Really nice additions! The material you added is really concisely worded and will add a lot of good content to the "Biological examples" section of the original page. One question: Do you intend to keep the marmoset/tamarin stuff that's already on the page in your edits? I think Callitrichines are especially worth noting - dominant females in social groups actually use pheromone cues to suppress ovulation in the other females in the group. Are there any other examples of this in other primates? Baboons maybe?

Tone and balance evaluation
Nothing wrong with the tone and balance. It reads neutrally.

Sources and references evaluation
Sources look good. They are fairly recent and look like a good number of them are review papers that are a secondary source of information. All links work.

Organization evaluation
Organization is good, doesn't really deviate from the organization of the original article.

Images and media evaluation
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New Article Evaluation
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Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation
I think these edits will be a good addition to the page! They are well-laid out and well-researched. I don't have much else to add other than keep the tamarin info in the article!!