User:Tanner Binion/Motivation Impairment Effect/Malamushu Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
I added suggestions to the wiki's talk page, but after conducting a more thorough peer review, I wanted to leave a few extra notes. Overall, I enjoy this article and think the content included is powerful and important to this topic. There are a decent amount of wiki links through out the article, but I think more could be included. I would also restyle the "signs indicating deception" section. In order to improve this, you could list the signs via bullet point list or create a small subsection for each sign and compare/contrast them in that way.