User:Tannerhmgiles/Cellana exarata/Bridget Fountain Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tannerhhmgiles


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Cellana exarata
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far, your article on the species Cellana exarata has started off really well! I think you have a good idea of what you want to talk about and that is laid out very nicely in your outline.

I like how you are including "Human Use" as one major subject within your article. You could definitely expand more on this topic and see if you can find any references that talk about what regions use it the most, and if this human use is effecting any population densities of the species.

I do think that the "Description" subject can be moved up to the top, so the species can be thoroughly described before adding any detail to where it's distributed or its habitat.

I appreciate how you provided links to specific words just like other wikipedia articles, especially for the other species you mentioned "Cellana sandwicensis". I think it would be cool if you added another section to your article about it's family/genus in general, maybe even mentioned the species it's closest too and their differences.

I see you have one solid reference at the bottom which is a good start. Continue to keep looking for more so you can add more content to your page.

In conclusion, you're off to a really good start! Keep adding sources and everything will fall in place.

-Bridget Fountain