User:Tannyx-24/Ibrahim Abdurrahman Farajajé/Jcblumha Peer Review

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This article provides new and direct information on Ibrahim Abdurrahman Farajajé. While the information is presented neutrally, it does come across as monotonous due to how the sentences are structured. Using transitions or restructuring some sentences could improve the article to make it more captivating or engaging. The article could also benefit from having more in-depth information on Farajajé as well as including more secondary sources. In addition, the citations in this article could also be improved; it is a Wikipedia article, so it is crucial to cite each piece of information to avoid plagiarism. It is also important for proper citations to be included in the bibliography rather than just links to articles. With this in mind, the article does provide new information on a figure that has contributed to the Feminist Movement.