User:Tanscan27/Niche (video game)/Freddy Munoz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * I'm reviewing Tanscan27

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tanscan27/Niche (video game)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Niche (video game)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

As I read through it, I feel like there is a lot more that can be added here. In the lead though it has a good description and easy way of explaining what the game is, I feel that there can be a stronger introduction sentence for it. There wasn't much added content to the article. In the gameplay section I think there should be more of an explanation of the games mechanics and the story line can be it's own section. The article is able to give off a good impression of the game but overall it needs more content so that it can be more better.

--~Thank you for your feedback. I am working on 3 articles and though I agree I do and WILL be adding more content to this specific article. My main article, which still needs peer reviewed if your up for it,  on 2.5D (Animation) is my main article that I am doing here for this Wikipedia assignment for English. Thank you again! ~