User:Tap3y9/Mental health inequality/Corawinkelman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tap3y9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tap3y9/Mental_health_inequality?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mental health inequality

Evaluate the drafted changes
So there wasn't much feedback in adding/editing information to this article. Only a citation and a mention of adding in something similar to what the article already included. I think the article picked was a great one because it needs a lot of work! I have some suggestions on what other things could be edited on this article. It primarily discusses issues with mental health inequality in the United States, not around the world.