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Naomi Alderman Article Draft: (Add to biography section)

Alderman became a strong advocate for feminism in her teenage years and has been a strong supporter of women's rights throughout her lifetime and career. Alderman is a strong advocate of the women’s movement, which inspired her works such as The Power. She advocates for young women to embrace their abilities and awaken the same empowerment in older generations of women. She does not agree with the ideology of men or women being superior to the other, but of the thought all people are equal and should be treated as such. Her viewpoint and support of women's rights has held great influence over her life's work.

Citation: La Ferla, R. (2018). Naomi alderman on the world that yielded the power. The New York Times. https://www.nytimes.com/2018/01/29/style/the-power-naomi-alderman.html

This is well written and provides good facts. I think, however that the end of the first sentence could be worded a little differently. The sentence ends with "it's battle won," which I think sounds kinda weird reading aloud.Bwolfson95 (talk) 21:07, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
This is a great addition. The tone of it is neutral. My only critique is that you expand on your first paragraph's point that feminism was understood to be at it's peak. You could talk about the time period and what was happening to give this point more context. Hcsamuel (talk) 03:33, 20 March 2018 (UTC)