User:Tashany.Velazquez/Las Catalinas Mall/Paola m. vázquez Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Tashany.Velazquez


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Tashany.Velazquez/Las Catalinas Mall

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Lead evaluation
'The Lead section is very clear about the topic and has been updated. It is a concise paragraph that includes a brief description about what is in the article.'

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Content evaluation
'The content is relevant and up-to-date but there are some bullets that doesn't belongs to the article like "to add to the history section:" or "add section:". I think this is to remember what is missing in the original article but it must be deleted when moving the sandbox text to the article.'

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Tone and balance evaluation
' The article is balanced and neutral. The content is not trying to persuade the reader.'

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Are the sources current?
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * Check a few links. Do they work?

Sources and references evaluation
' There are only three references in the article, I think that it needs more references to go. In another hand, one of the references is a PDF document but I don't know who wrote it and where the information is. Also, one of the links doesn't have any article to go, it is the Bartolomé Borrás' link.'

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Organization evaluation
' The content is well-written and also well-organized. It is broken into sections that reflect the major points.'

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

Images and media evaluation
'The original article have one imagine of the Catalina's logo. I think that image should stay there because it is relevant, but the article must include more photos. Maybe, this images can be from the Food Court or of the exterior of the Mall.'

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation
'The content added is very useful. The author can improve that content by adding the stores that can be found at the Mall.'