User:Taughey/Mother/Anysoberanis8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Taughey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Taughey/Mother/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mother

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Amazing topic you have chosen to add into the already public page of Mother, I'm surprised at how short that it really need to be fatten more with information on motherhood as I'm sure there is more to add into it for sure. I'm not sure how necessary it is to have your bibliography page filled with work citied but I did notice you didn't add them there only to your sandbox. but other than that your article feel full of insightful view of the lack of diversity there is of mothers that could really enrich the existing page. your work seems neutral as well as backed up with your citations/research. There isn't anything that you didn't touch on while looking at the peer review checklist.