User:Taughey/Mother/Cameron Kletke Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Taughey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Taughey/Mother - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mother - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think the section you're planning to add to the "Mother" wikipedia page is really well-written and an important addition.

I think it would be beneficial to include a photograph of Mary Kelly's Post-Partum Document, to add further context and insight into how her art bypassed typical themes of tenderness. I think you could also include some references to women's Holocaust and post-Holocaust art, as what you've described feels broad and unspecific.

The citations you've used for this segment are well-referenced, although (this might just be a me problem) but I'm unable to access citation 4 and 5.

The second paragraph of the "In Art" section could give a brief reference to Adrienne Rich's profession. Perhaps you could start this sentence with "American poet and feminist, Adrienne Rich, has noted..." etc.

I love how you've referenced recent 2020 photograph collections by Solana Cain, this is a great addition which closes the equity gaps on Wikipedia and addresses topics related to historically underrepresented populations. This is also a great recent element that keeps this page current. This is just a suggestion, but I've noticed you've referenced photography multiple times in this section, if you wanted to add more for this project you could even create another sub-section and include "in photography" and make the "in art" section the overarching theme. Overall the content you've added to the topic is up-to-date, readable, non-bias and overall a great edition to the Mother Wikipedia topic!