User:Taybledsoe/Childhood amnesia/Gabutler Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Taybledsoe


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Taybledsoe/Childhood amnesia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Childhood amnesia

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is pretty lengthy, so I could see why it might difficult to find a place to start in. However I did find an article that touches on the effects of institutionalization and foster care has on early memories, which I didn't see covered on the original article. I'll link it here https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5473198/. I think that would be an interesting section to add. I also think adding a few pictures could spruce the article up as a whole, maybe with info-graphs or comic examples. There were only two references past 2018, so I think maybe finding newer research and checking if any information is outdated could help. I'm excited to see your future contributions!