User:Taylcis/Alice Hamilton/Mtibbs Peer Review

General info
Taylcis
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Taylcis/Alice Hamilton
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Alice Hamilton

Evaluate the drafted changes
Taylcis' draft shows several meaningful contributions to the Alice Hamilton page. I have a newfound respect for Alice Hamilton and her history as a champion for those around her. Taylcis also added several needed and relevant citations that added relevance to the page.

Wording correction:

"More than 1,100 women from neutral and at-war nations attended than  the conference. "

Other than that one correction, I genuinely felt that the contributions made were relevant and well-done.